All in the Line of Duty
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Marion
- Cloudbase Captain
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I admire the way she fleshes out the obviously loving (but not without its secrets) relationship between the Colonel and Lady Grey, and Green gets a chance to show her mettle away from Skybase. (Glad you found the excuse to get Blue in there somehow, Isa!

The action scenes were rendered very well, I could imagine the whole thing unfolding, and I especially enjoyed Black's internal dilemma at the hospital, subtle but forceful in its suggestion of his possible inner turmoil.
Well done!

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Carrie
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