Some new fanfic to see us through to Halloween!
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Dan:
http://www.spectrum-headquarters.com/fa ... gambit.htm Clever angle! Was very impressed with the chess moves.
Intensity Angel:
http://www.spectrum-headquarters.com/fa ... ke_son.htm - A very nice little piece for your first attempt! Well done!
Captain Indy; (Indigo...not Indiana, I presume...

http://www.spectrum-headquarters.com/fa ... orever.htm
I did enjoy this, liked all the references to the episodes, cleverly woven into the narrative. Poor Captain Magenta, he really does get the rough end of the stick from the colonel, and not only within the fevered imaginings of Symphony Angel, either

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Dan - didn't quite understand all the chess moves when they were listed one after the other (I must confess that I'm just about an expert of chess as White


Love it!
Intensity Angel - Aww! It was so sweet! I never really picked up on the 'awkwardness' of Scarlet talking about his dad... this might explain why!

Love it!
Also loved the 'P.S.' part too!

So are you going to be a NCS or a OCS writer? It doesn't matter if you're still unsure yet.
that's madness with a little 'm'... as in 'crazy'...

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However......
I did like all of them. Dan, the chess idea was really clever and original. You clearly know your stuff where chess is concerned, and if you don't, you've researched well ! Keep it up !
Intensity, that was a lovely piece showing the father & son bond. I agree there are loads and loads of opportunities to explore the NCS characters. Are you writers out there listening ? The few cannot do the work of the many !

Capt Indy, your story was both amusing and sad. No-one likes to think that the end of the Mysterons will be the end of our beloved Capt Scarlet, but it was plausible and well- written. I always have great respect for people who are not prepared to always go for the happy ending !
Mary, really look forward to getting to grips with "Colouring the Troops", but the way things are going, that may be something for the weekend !
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