Series Three Episodes
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by Serena Lewis » Thu Aug 02, 2007 7:03 pm
Hmmm...maybe she could say it as he dies? Oh...I'm gonna write this now! No one else do it, it's mine! 
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'...the bike that Adam took a dislike to...'
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by foster » Thu Aug 02, 2007 7:11 pm
Cool! I can't wait to read it.
"Donna!" whispered the Doctor, beckoning her forwards. "What d'you make of this?"
She peered at it.
"You're going to tell me that it encapsulates the eternal struggle between The Pussycat Dolls and Girls Aloud, aren't you?"
She peered at it.
"You're going to tell me that it encapsulates the eternal struggle between The Pussycat Dolls and Girls Aloud, aren't you?"
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by foster » Thu Aug 02, 2007 7:50 pm
Don't worry I don't think anbody will steal the idea. (Please don't, this is going to be groundbreaking.)
Serena, if you're reading this, and still writing the extract, I have an idea for the setting. It could be, once again, in the middle of the New Mexico desert, just like in 'Grey Skulls'. Time of day would definately be late evening, that always has a romantic/sad atmosphere.
Maybe the burning of Rhinos or Raid bikes strewn across the sandy wastes? I dunno these are just ideas. See what you think of them, if you read it in time. If not it doesn't matter.
Serena, if you're reading this, and still writing the extract, I have an idea for the setting. It could be, once again, in the middle of the New Mexico desert, just like in 'Grey Skulls'. Time of day would definately be late evening, that always has a romantic/sad atmosphere.
Maybe the burning of Rhinos or Raid bikes strewn across the sandy wastes? I dunno these are just ideas. See what you think of them, if you read it in time. If not it doesn't matter.
"Donna!" whispered the Doctor, beckoning her forwards. "What d'you make of this?"
She peered at it.
"You're going to tell me that it encapsulates the eternal struggle between The Pussycat Dolls and Girls Aloud, aren't you?"
She peered at it.
"You're going to tell me that it encapsulates the eternal struggle between The Pussycat Dolls and Girls Aloud, aren't you?"
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by Serena Lewis » Thu Aug 02, 2007 7:59 pm
I will write it, but maybe not tonight. I'm working on another 'masterpiece' concerning Ochre. I am getting SO ahead of myself!
I'm baring all these ideas in mind though!
'Groundbreaking'. Heehee...
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I'm baring all these ideas in mind though!
'Groundbreaking'. Heehee...
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'...the bike that Adam took a dislike to...'
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by foster » Thu Aug 02, 2007 8:02 pm
Great I can't wait. I can be like that with my writing. I have so many ideas I just grab random word documents and write whole pages down. Its like I'm hypnotized and won't stop until all the ideas are gone.
Its freaky!!!!
Is the other Ochre masterpiece you're working on the one when she's ten?
Its freaky!!!!
Is the other Ochre masterpiece you're working on the one when she's ten?
"Donna!" whispered the Doctor, beckoning her forwards. "What d'you make of this?"
She peered at it.
"You're going to tell me that it encapsulates the eternal struggle between The Pussycat Dolls and Girls Aloud, aren't you?"
She peered at it.
"You're going to tell me that it encapsulates the eternal struggle between The Pussycat Dolls and Girls Aloud, aren't you?"
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by Serena Lewis » Thu Aug 02, 2007 8:04 pm
No, it's supposed to be one in a series. the third one, this one is. Second ones in beta...or something. That's what I meant about getting ahead of myself. I haven't even got the second one 'published', and I'm already writing the third! 
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'...the bike that Adam took a dislike to...'
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by foster » Thu Aug 02, 2007 8:07 pm
That's alright...most proffesional writers write a book and quickly move on to the next one before they even show it to the publishers.
I can't remember what they call writers like that now, but I know that I'm like it.
Some people just prefer to work that way, and get the most success out of it.
Good luck anyway!!!
I can't remember what they call writers like that now, but I know that I'm like it.
Some people just prefer to work that way, and get the most success out of it.
Good luck anyway!!!
"Donna!" whispered the Doctor, beckoning her forwards. "What d'you make of this?"
She peered at it.
"You're going to tell me that it encapsulates the eternal struggle between The Pussycat Dolls and Girls Aloud, aren't you?"
She peered at it.
"You're going to tell me that it encapsulates the eternal struggle between The Pussycat Dolls and Girls Aloud, aren't you?"
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by foster » Fri Aug 03, 2007 12:54 pm
Another idea popped into my head last night whilst I was trying to get to sleep:
Maybe Colt could take a bullet for her? That always has something romantic to do with it. A Mysteron replicant with a gun could sneak up from behind her, Colt would see and push her to one side as the shot is fired. Could be good?
The rest is up to you, Serena, I just give ideas.
Maybe Colt could take a bullet for her? That always has something romantic to do with it. A Mysteron replicant with a gun could sneak up from behind her, Colt would see and push her to one side as the shot is fired. Could be good?
The rest is up to you, Serena, I just give ideas.
"Donna!" whispered the Doctor, beckoning her forwards. "What d'you make of this?"
She peered at it.
"You're going to tell me that it encapsulates the eternal struggle between The Pussycat Dolls and Girls Aloud, aren't you?"
She peered at it.
"You're going to tell me that it encapsulates the eternal struggle between The Pussycat Dolls and Girls Aloud, aren't you?"
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by foster » Fri Aug 03, 2007 12:58 pm
Oh, and Colt would kill the replicant, of course. That would just be stupid otherwise.
The thing is, it would have to be a damn lucky shot.
The thing is, it would have to be a damn lucky shot.
"Donna!" whispered the Doctor, beckoning her forwards. "What d'you make of this?"
She peered at it.
"You're going to tell me that it encapsulates the eternal struggle between The Pussycat Dolls and Girls Aloud, aren't you?"
She peered at it.
"You're going to tell me that it encapsulates the eternal struggle between The Pussycat Dolls and Girls Aloud, aren't you?"
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by foster » Sun Aug 05, 2007 2:02 pm
Can we do eyes 'glistening'?
Sorry I forgot to reply to this...
Yeah whatever you want really. Make her REALLY upset, especially the moment he dies.
"Donna!" whispered the Doctor, beckoning her forwards. "What d'you make of this?"
She peered at it.
"You're going to tell me that it encapsulates the eternal struggle between The Pussycat Dolls and Girls Aloud, aren't you?"
She peered at it.
"You're going to tell me that it encapsulates the eternal struggle between The Pussycat Dolls and Girls Aloud, aren't you?"
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by foster » Sun Aug 05, 2007 2:10 pm
I'm actually having another crack at writing a LONG fan fic now. I'm ditching the regualr appearances of the main characters and going into more detail of the secondary captain's lives. One guy who is going to appear a lot in it is Captain Indigo, and Captain Grey. I'm not too sure about Brown or Orange, they don't even have names so I guess I'll make them up.
Captain Ochre will appear a lot and so will Magenta.
Don't get me wrong though, Blue, Green, White, Scarlet and the Angels will appear, just less frequently.
This is truly a chance for the lesser characters to shine.
Captain Ochre will appear a lot and so will Magenta.
Don't get me wrong though, Blue, Green, White, Scarlet and the Angels will appear, just less frequently.
This is truly a chance for the lesser characters to shine.
"Donna!" whispered the Doctor, beckoning her forwards. "What d'you make of this?"
She peered at it.
"You're going to tell me that it encapsulates the eternal struggle between The Pussycat Dolls and Girls Aloud, aren't you?"
She peered at it.
"You're going to tell me that it encapsulates the eternal struggle between The Pussycat Dolls and Girls Aloud, aren't you?"
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by Intensity Angel » Sun Jun 15, 2008 2:34 am
In my fan fiction I'm currently writing, I've paired Rhapsody and Captain Grey together. It would be nice to see more of the other Angels and see which officers they fancy.
Also I created a super mysteron agent, Moira who is supposed to replace Captain Black but fails as she breaks free. in my latest fan fiction story (two chapters complete, yes!!). It would be nice to see a non Spectrum character working alongside Captains Scarlet and Blue and helping them out.
I have thought about this in detail, what I would like to see if a thrid season came out and here are a couple other ideas.
1. The return of Astrid Winters!!
2. The Mysterons trying to destroy Big Ben
3. An epsiode dedicated to Rhapsody, Melody and Symphony.
Also I created a super mysteron agent, Moira who is supposed to replace Captain Black but fails as she breaks free. in my latest fan fiction story (two chapters complete, yes!!). It would be nice to see a non Spectrum character working alongside Captains Scarlet and Blue and helping them out.
I have thought about this in detail, what I would like to see if a thrid season came out and here are a couple other ideas.
1. The return of Astrid Winters!!
2. The Mysterons trying to destroy Big Ben
3. An epsiode dedicated to Rhapsody, Melody and Symphony.
Our friends are just Angels without wings...and they never ever leave us, even when we can't see them beside us.
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