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I personally have written very little fanfic in 1st person, and those tend to be outright character studies [oh and the one vignette I wrote in 2nd person, just prove I could].
Started to wonder why that was the case. Is it that because CS is a TV based fandom ultimatly we are always going to be 'outside observers' and therefore mirror that in our writing?
Don't have a problem either, just thought it was an interesting observation.
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I was taught - as a dewy-eyed schoolgirl - that the first person story is best kept to something that only needs to be seen from one point of view. The motivations of characters other than the narrator, have to be filtered through his/her perceptions anyway, so that can be tricky in a complicated action-based story.
It could well be wrong - I seem to remember that Charlotte Bronte pulled it off in 'Jane Eyre'....

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Hmm yeah that's a good point.
The story I'm working right now is first person, but each 'chapter' is from a diffrent character's perspective. Have seen that done in a novel and it does work. Long as everyone has a pretty unique voice and you signpost the switches.
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Yes, I have agonised over it, until my head hurts.
I'm (still) writing my current multiverse story in what I call 'third person limited omniscient', well, thats what it WILL be when I've edited so it reads like that!!!!!

It's a multi-character, multi-action with lots of internal monologues for some of the main protagonists, and I really had to watch it, for in the 'head' of that character, they can't see themselves blush..for example, or see their hair flying out around them, or know what someone else was thinking....
If not writing in first person , then most (decent) writing books suggest one POV per scene for third person POV, otherwise the reader doesnt know which character to root for (as it were!) in the scene, and feels like they're watching a tennis match, batting the emotions or thoughts from one character to another. Also it can dilute tension if we know what everyone's thinking in that scene...
I guess the beauty of POV is that it allows the writer to change the tone of a story, and engage the readers emotions differently
It's a very powerful tool at the writers command if used correctly.
Totally agree with what you said about various 'first person's' in the same story if signposted correctly, Sage.
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Frankly, I personally wish Gerry Anderson and Sylvia Anderson had taken the trouble to explore that possibility to a greater degree than they actually did.
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