I need a little help...

[Maltray]

As some of you know I've been busy of late with my new site.

http://www.maltrayfox.furtopia.org/

As I am writing "Winged Assassin" I've come to a sudden stop and need a little help. Basicly I want someone to look over it for me and let me know if it sounds alright. In a ideal world I would be able to chat about it with some one on a messager like yahoo BTW my SN is Maltray001 if your intreasted I know I have set myself a big goal but I am sure I can do it with a little help from you my freinds and people I know. If your intreasted in helping me out please let me know.

My goal is a lofty one and usually I fall short of the mark at times. But I am sure this won't happen, this time.

I'm writing a furry version of Captain Scarlet and all 32 episodes. I will also be adding my own stuff and such so if you would like to help me just let me know thank you all.

I'm upto the scene where the first Mysteron attempt on the life of the Director Genral of the asian republic goes wrong for the Mysterons. I'm stuck there. Captain's Scarket and Blue have been talking about what happened at the London Car Vu. Scarlet metions Conrad and how if he (Scarlet) could regain conto9l of himself why not Black.

[Excerpt]

Nearby a Spectrum Saloon car slipped into the city and made it's way throught the local traffic. Captain Scarlet had been thinking he knew what had happen and he and Blue had talked over everything that had taken place. Scarlet wasn't really sure he wanted to know now, there was a saying 'what you don't know can't hurt you' perhaps it was right. The Mysterons he'd been under their control just like Captain Black, Scarlet sighed softly perhaps if Black could be captured and with the help of Dr Fawn. Well it was something to hope for, but from what Blue told him it was still unknown why he had broken the contol of the Mysterons. Indestrutible Fawn had said Scarlet wasn't so sure. What had happened to Captain Black no one was sure, he had been spotted but had vanished.

"Scarlet you seem well distant" commented Blue.

"I was thinking about Conrad" Scarlet replied.

"Conrad's gone Paul it's best we forget him. Only Captain Black remains and he's in the hands of the Mysterons. There's nothing we can do" said Blue as he parked the car.

"So was I though and I'm back arn't I?" asked Scarlet.

"We still don't really know why Paul.....I'm sorry" answered Blue.