VMR's Into the Depths

by **Isabelle** » Sun Oct 30, 2016 4:34 pm

This year, VMR used a multi-parter approach that suited her story perfectly and had us wonder was was happening. I wouldn't have wanted to be in her characters's shoes - er - fins.

I wish I could come up with creative and believable Mysteron threats like she does. Good work! 8M-M)

by **Marion** » Sun Oct 30, 2016 5:49 pm

A very good story from VMR - happening in an unusual setting - for Spectrum!
Thank you for a most enjoyable read.

by **VMR** » Thu Nov 03, 2016 2:47 am

Thanks guys.

I’m please that you enjoy the story. It was an interesting story to write as it changed so much from when I first thought up the idea. I ended up adding Grey’s part because I wondered if what happen to Sepia’s was scarily enough. :twisted:

Then I realize that the why, what, how need to be explained, hence the other captains as well as Colonel White‘s pieces.
Oh if you read the last bit as soon as it was posted then please re-read it, as I accidentally left out a small bit. Thankfully Chris put it right as soon as I let her know. Oh well that’s why I pre-apologize for mistakes in the acknowledgements.

VMR

by **Carrie** » Sun Nov 06, 2016 8:46 pm

VMR, a nice story! You had me guessing for a while, trying to figure out what was going on. It was such an unusual angle on a threat.
Keep writing, it's great to get your stories.
(hugs)

by **VMR** » Mon Nov 07, 2016 4:26 am

Thanks Carrie, nice to hear from you.