Lee Homer's Unpleasant Encounter.

by **VMR** » Mon Oct 17, 2016 3:55 am

Greeting Lee.

What an interesting story. Well done for your first Halloween challenge. :-;)

Coming up with something different to the usual supernatural beings is not easy. Good on you for using a localize legend and coming up with a believable way for ‘our’ Captains to meet up with it. Again well done. 8M-M)

VMR

by **Carrie** » Sat Oct 29, 2016 10:30 pm

Nicely told story, Lee, well done. :-;)

by **Isabelle** » Sun Oct 30, 2016 4:04 pm

Seeing other NCS stories is always welcome, and as VMR said, you managed to come up with something different for this challenge. Well done Lee! 8M-M)

Hopefully, what happened to a certain Captain isn't permanent (although I would have liked to see a certain Lieutenant's reaction to that situation...)

by **Marion** » Sun Oct 30, 2016 5:52 pm

An intriguing story, fraught with an unusual danger for the Captains. Like Isabelle, I hope nothing's permanent!