Mind Games

by **adam** » Thu Mar 27, 2008 9:25 pm

I love reading her storys!! and this one is as good as the others! it is very well written and its very deep and dark.

i think she writes it just right really! gets u gripped too!!

by **Serena Lewis** » Thu Mar 27, 2008 9:35 pm

Oh, thank you! :-D

I'm really glad you like them!
Anyone else like it? Please let me know! :grin:

xx

P.S. Hmm...maybe no then. Never mind!

by **Intensity Angel** » Sun Jun 15, 2008 5:50 am

I really enjoy reading your stories. They always draw me in. Keep up the good work. 8M-M)

by **Serena Lewis** » Sun Jun 15, 2008 8:18 pm

Hmm...thanks! I'm glad someone likes it!
Hopefully, I'll have something else up soon. Just have to frantic type now...

xx

by **Intensity Angel** » Sun Jun 15, 2008 8:21 pm

Never rush fan fiction, it got me into a right mess once!!

by **Serena Lewis** » Sun Jun 15, 2008 8:25 pm

No, I mean that I need to write down all these scenes in my head that are there, and I haven't written yet, before I forget them. I know how they're gonna go, just haven't written them.
Didn't explain myself clearly, sorry...

xx

by **Intensity Angel** » Sun Jun 15, 2008 8:28 pm

No worries, I understand what you are saying.

by **adam** » Sun Jun 15, 2008 9:02 pm

i wonder why other people dont disscus what they thought about the story, would be grate to hear what other people think of my friends stories!!!! :grin:

by **Serena Lewis** » Sun Jun 15, 2008 9:06 pm

LOL, thanks. I would like to hear what people think, very much, but don't feel you have to reply. Only reply if you want.

xx

by **Intensity Angel** » Sun Jun 15, 2008 9:15 pm

I'm sure others will reply when they've read your work.

by **Serena Lewis** » Sun Jun 15, 2008 9:17 pm

I hope. It has been up for a while though. I don't want people to feel they have to reply though! It'd make me feel mean. So don't unless you want to, people!

xx

by **MMK** » Tue Jun 17, 2008 8:48 am

adam wrote:i wonder why other people dont disscus what they thought about the story, would be grate to hear what other people think of my friends stories!!!!

I do.. but I either have college work to do (stupid 'real life'! :evil:

) or I have my head buried in reading fanfics (sometimes trying to read as many as I can before the next fanfic Challenge is announced :wink:

).

Sorry

by **Intensity Angel** » Tue Jun 17, 2008 1:54 pm

Well I've got the time off to do whatever so...

I really like Mind Game as it introduces us to Captain Ochre and how she copes with her emotions, From Serena Lewis' POV. In the series Ochre's always seen as a strict character who keeps personel things locked away so it's nice to see what could be bubbling away underneath.

I really like how you've explored with her personality Serena, keep it up!! I hope you use Captain Ochre more often.

by **adam** » Sun Jun 22, 2008 7:51 pm

hi all!!

great more replys and i'm glad you like her storys!
yeah there are so many stories on this site so thanks to replying to her story and i hope more do!!!

thank you!!!!! :grin: