Compromising Positions
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Compromising Positions
by Marion » Sun Jan 13, 2008 10:09 am
Another great new NCS story from Skybase Girl on the site today! Compromising Positions
It's nice to see Colonel White getting the (ahem) attention he deserves...
I have to say, I quite agree with the way you've portrayed his family - very nice!
A disinclination to sparkle...
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by luvmylops » Sun Jan 13, 2008 1:58 pm
Great job, Skybase Girl!
You are definitely 'fleshing' out the characters from NCS. Can hardly wait for your next story!
You are definitely 'fleshing' out the characters from NCS. Can hardly wait for your next story!
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by hazel » Sun Jan 13, 2008 6:28 pm
Agreed! Another one for formatting and printing out. Well done, Skybase Girl!
Love the notion of sweet little Victoria being a man-eater, and Magenta not caring that the girl he's going to have a crack at seducing is his CO's daughter.
Love the notion of sweet little Victoria
being a man-eater, and Magenta not caring that the girl he's going to have a crack at seducing is his CO's daughter."You can use the Oxford Comma if you want, but I choose not to associate myself with that kind of depraved and godless lifestyle"
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by Sage » Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:22 pm
That's really good 
Brilliant insights into the characters. Lots of tender and funny moments.
I would so love to read the continuing misadventures of Vicky & Mario.
Brilliant insights into the characters. Lots of tender and funny moments.
I would so love to read the continuing misadventures of Vicky & Mario.
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by Skybase Girl » Sun Jan 13, 2008 9:45 pm
Thanks, everyone !
I wrote this in roughly, four or five hours in total - yes, I can hardly believe it myself ! I found myself becoming quite fond of Chas & Di. This was meant to be a one-off, but Colonel White's family may well make a re-appearance in future.
As for Vicky and Romeo, I hadn't really envisaged that as anything more than a one-night stand, but you've given me food for thought, Sage !
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by Sage » Sun Jan 13, 2008 10:36 pm
Wow go you
It would have taken me at least a day, well maybe less if I worked solid. So your focus is admirable.
Oh yeah I figured it would be a one night stand too; but there's still plenty of potential there. I don't really think colonel would be cool with that.
It would have taken me at least a day, well maybe less if I worked solid. So your focus is admirable.
Oh yeah I figured it would be a one night stand too; but there's still plenty of potential there. I don't really think colonel would be cool with that.
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by Carrie » Thu Jan 31, 2008 2:56 pm
Sigh, I bow in admiration (and somewhat enviously too!) at being able to produce such a fine piece of work in such a short space of time. A very nicely written story, true-to-life dialogue, and little asides that set the tone.
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by Skybase Girl » Thu Jan 31, 2008 11:18 pm
Thanks, everyone. I surprised myself with this one. I really had no thoughts about doing another piece for Christmas, but it wrote itself, although I wasn't happy with the ending and wrote the last scene as a result of that.
My intention was to make Victoria as Mary Sue- ish as possible, but it seems to have back-fired in a curious kind of way. I think the precocious little man-eater might take on a life of her own......
Damn you, Sage ! You have fed my evil demons, who knows what will happen now !
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by Sage » Thu Jan 31, 2008 11:38 pm
LOL I can live with that.
She is pretty Mary-Sueish really, but it works. Not sure I'll ever look at her in the same way.
She is pretty Mary-Sueish really, but it works. Not sure I'll ever look at her in the same way.
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